Wednesday, May 25, 2005

Behind The Old Mill Comments

Rating: 3.5

Purple heather
by the old mill,
the waterwheel
turning impatiently,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Herbert Nehrlich1 27 May 2005

The secret is to make it the last word (I like to have the last word) , drop H (and not to use it as dropp or drop) . H

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Mary Nagy 27 May 2005

ok, the p is showing up double

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Mary Nagy 27 May 2005

dropp (sp) sorry..............

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Mary Nagy 27 May 2005

Herbert, I'm here to read and enjoy poetry. Nothing more....nothing less. Hopefully I can dropp a comment here or there that somebody may appreciate. I'm glad to hear you do. I try to treat people with the respect I hope to receive from them. Never doubt my sincerity. Mary

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Herbert Nehrlich1 26 May 2005

Thank you Mary. I really like your comments on my poems and appreciate the wisdom of your words. I had been a bit unsure of things and that phase has passed thanks to you. Best wishes H

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Mary Nagy 26 May 2005

Very nice poem. Really captures that 'innocence' of young love. Nothing compares to that age of childhood. Great. Sincerely, Mary

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