Behind The Mask Comments
What you see before you is not always as it seems.
All you have to do is look within.
Look behind the scene and you will see the untold story.
Behind every DARKNESS hides a beam of
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Thanks for all your comments , I appreciate it. This is a work in progress
Uche, usually, poems that offer life lessons work best when they rely on showing (vivid images and original figures of speech) rather than telling (using abstractions like beauty, story, truth) . Maybe read lots of good contemporary poetry in English (Billy Collins, Mary Oliver) . If you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me how you like it. Thanks! Yrs, JC
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9/7/2025 11:54:34 AM # 1.0.0
Beautiful rhetorical piece of poetry elegantly brought forth in awesome poetic diction with conviction. Focussed and factual. Very philosophical. Thanks for sharing Uche and do remain blessed.