Sunday, June 28, 2009

Behind The Mask Comments

Rating: 3.5

Everyday, i sit down and put on my mask
A face that everyone knows best
With large eyes and a big smile
For you and you and you
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jason mcgookin
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Actually every human being have a mask which covers his face and this poem reiterates the point well.

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Ashley Stone 14 August 2009

I think everyone has a mask, and I don't know about you but I'm still wearing mine. It's a heavy burden to bare but lighter than the stares once the real you is revealed. This is one of your best in my opinion.

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. . 28 June 2009

Bravo Jason! A mask is a heavy burden to bare, but it seems sometimes so necessary. I look forward to more of your work.

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Rosalita Fernandez 28 June 2009

I can relate to this so well, Brilliant choice of words effective poem and one many can relate too, thank you: o)

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