Thursday, April 7, 2016

Behind The Familiar Eyelids Comments

Rating: 5.0

All the memories of childhood
Lies there
In your eyes that
Never cease to blink at
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Valsa George 22 July 2017

This is a clever write, specially intended for some one named Alina....! This poem with acrostic stanzas breathes out pure emotions of love and longings!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Thanks dear Madam for these nice words of encouragement. Sorry for the great delayed response.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 May 2016

Memories! Awakening the core! ! Nice piece of work.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Thanks my dear Sir for these nice words of encouragement.

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Anita Aparajita Das 17 May 2016

All the inner urges of adolescence Lies there In your nostrils that Never cease to swell about Awakening the core of my psyche. All the thrilling days of teenage Lies there In those pink lips of yours that Never cease to fill in A desire to be always within me. Who this ALINA is..a new entrant in your heart.? However good poem. Love it. 10 out of 10. Nitu

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Thanks my dear Neetu for these nice words of encouragement.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 29 April 2016

All the memories of childhood Lies there In your eyes that Never cease to blink at Appealing the core of my heart. I liked the stanza more than the others. Did a girl by name Alina wanted you put her name as the initials? Every stanza contains a name ALINA, Are you any way related to her? Would you refer about her anyway? Enjoyed reading it. Thanks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Thanks dear Seema for these nice words of encouragement.

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