Monday, September 18, 2006

Behind The Face Comments

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Like oceans hide within them,
These creatures can surface.
Like the MOON soothens us down,
And heat leaves without a trace.
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ARSHAJ GAIKWAD
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Nalini Hebbar 18 September 2006

a very powerful write arshaj...full of meaning and truth...love...nalini

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Preeti - is here! 18 September 2006

Arshaj, this is a superb piece of poetry, perfect rhymes, superb content! You are so right, we and only we can decide which face of ourselves we want to see and we want to show to the world! a 10 rating for this one~ Preets

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Brian Dorn 18 September 2006

Interesting write, Arshaj... very profound! Brian

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