Monday, September 8, 2008

Behind The Door Comments

Rating: 3.0

the second i turn,
and close the door,
my eyes begin to burn,
and the tears begin to pour,
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Maya Robena
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Greenwolfe 1962 22 September 2008

These are words describing a series of feelings. But they are absent any context for a reader. This is almost voyeurism. It is senseless to the viewer. I cannot recommend this. GW62

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