Behind The Desks Of The Dead Comments

I love the conclusion, your last line..super hope and 'bulb-ing' minded hahaha...This is critical writing that expressing all realities, the world life series but in a flow not in movie but poetry :) Great and bold voice..Mastery in language, so i should not surprise you have this poem written by you! ! ! Write more! _Unwritten Soul

very politically charged as many poems of my friends too, i never thought i'de write a political poem but i was many times tempted to and i guess there's a time in our lives when we become to a certain extent enfluenced by politics and its -so called 'leaders'- the poem describes a very well known problem, the corruption of politicians, and i think around the world, many people would relate to it, very well penned

tank sir for all this word I find them very interesting I hope for you good luck for every think and I am looking for your words.....