Thursday, January 26, 2017

Behind The Bars Comments

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I stood facing my reflection,
taken over as days pass by someone unknown.
Blissful days are hard and far
rather, for this beaten-up heart.
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Aida Shaji
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Dr Antony Theodore 28 April 2018

No bars ever was broken by the screams and begs of humanism for these merely are of no concern to the sinners of the Earth. let the fire reach the peak. there is a real poetess in you hiding. at such a young age yu write great poems.. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 September 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Aida. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Chinedu Dike 26 January 2017

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and nice penned with insight. Thanks for sharing Aida.

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