Monday, October 27, 2008

Behind Oaken Door [repost] Comments

Rating: 4.9

Nite Nite Ma! !
He whispers mischeviously
Planting a half done hasty kiss on her
agebeaten brow
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Rehan Hyder
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Linda Ori 17 October 2009

Such a beautiful yet sad sentiment, Rehan. We all have our moments of remeniscence, when life and love were young and vibrant. A very touching piece, very effectively written. Linda

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Francesca Martin 07 June 2009

Absolutely wonderful-diction, flow, imagery. Gave it a 10!

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Marieta Maglas 04 June 2009

''Between now and youth she smiles inwardly as memory rushes to paint The canvas of reminiscence…'' he can see her, by being behind the oaken door, and he can paint her with his eyes in his soul....by keeping her youth in his memory......10++

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Sathyanarayana M V S 05 November 2008

This is outstanding poetry in content as well as the expression. Ur words are lovely. A great piece indeed................10

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