Thursday, February 14, 2013

Behind My Eyes Comments

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Behind my eyes, I begin to see you, love
Through the thick haze of darkness
How deeply I long for your hands grasping
And your lips sweeping.
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Crystal Rosser
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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 14 December 2014

a very good and simple write. enjoyed it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Rasheed Dawodu 14 February 2013

Nice use of simile. very rich in language.

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Crystal Rosser

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