Wednesday, February 6, 2008

Behind My Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

The pressure building behind my eyes,
Makes it hard to see,
What is truth?
Which words are lies?
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Mackenzie Scholte
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Lost Soul 21 February 2008

this poam is well written. alot of people see this happen. i can really see the message of the poem. good work. keep on writing.

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Amie-Lee ...... 17 February 2008

Good work, this is a poem that proves that some people should take a good look in the mirror before saying things like that.

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