Behind Iron Bars. Comments

it was a great idea to repeat the the firt and last line. that was kind of the essence of the poem. inspirational...definetely well done.

Excellent John. The repetition works so well and brings the imagery straight through my eyes into my heart. When I look from the bottom line, the last word night, has twilight twice above it. I love this poem. 10

How wonderful his view of the silver stars behind iron bars. Inspirational!

hi john are feeling a bit closed in, nice poem, have you been a guest, or are u feeling a bit closed in as i say, terry

Fine lines good job..........