.
Behind her eyes
do you see
a deep blue good-bye
...
Read full text
A stunning poem that brings forth various emotions that floats on the surface of the earth with depression, disaster, anger, hatred and hopelessness of life.
Most profound and deserving poem dear friend Susan. Heartiest Congratulations for the Poem of the day.
Congratulations for member poem place. This poem is beyond any star ratings.
Oh My! Such a powerful poem. I am speechless! simply trying to digest the effect of these fiery words.
It is a test of wills, true. but better the devil I know than the devil I don't know.
A powerful and meaningful poem embellished with stunning poetic expressions and wonderful presentation. Beautifully crafted and well executed worth revisiting. Congratulations! ! ! !
Is it really open season? Where's my rifle? Seriously, this is excellent and well-deserving as its selection as Member Poem of the Day!
So much has been captured in your words. A story that connects to so many lives. Thank you
I think Susan Sontag would be proud sharing her name with you.
Many congratulations to you dear poetess! I have nothing to offer you at prasent. Pray God to fetch you good health, peace and prosperity!
Is it your world or our world that is on the verge of collapse? Time to ponder, time to be afraid of.Hearty congratulations Susan Williams for this poem being selected as the Poem of the Day!
is it is it time to be afraid to at last be afraid that they will end their endless strife and there'll soon be 412 bones lurching across the Great Divide---Your strong motions find profound expression in this poem.
This poem should be in the curriculum of every school in the entire world! I sincerely mean it! The cycle of domestic abuse must stop NOW! Susan, this heart-wrenching poem continues to send shivers down my spine. It is truly worthy of POD! Heartiest of Congrats, dear poetess friend!
Anyways, POD gave me an occasion for a revisit. Which I enjoyed, this harsh commentary on sourcing relationships expressed in exquisite poetry
Printing error, sorry. Please read ‘souring'… instead of sourcing.
This is the Best Poem on PoemHunter, as far as my wisdom goes. So, it should be permanently featured as The Best Poem. But ph has its ways…
This poem is featured as the Poem Of The Day-Members today. Congratulations, Susie. Or shall I congratulate PoemHunter, for selecting this poem as POD today, AFTER SIX LONG YEARS since it was published?
Top stars for this emotionally charged poem that spells the truth of life. To my favourite as well.