Behind Every Smile, Theres A Frown Comments

Going through a Ben Poem page I come to know of you only then, Kevia...and feel glad in that, thanks to Ben...a compelling title i picked this one to read you..well, this poem is a good example to how a truth can be told in truthful words most poetically.. 'Whats hidden in the dark must come to light, so why lie? why live that life? ' this part of the poem I liked most...10/10

While reading this I feel the invitation to get to know you better and that I would be accepted into a lasting friendship. Nice combination of rhymes. I like the last stanza with its original twists and the ending is just right. I like these lines in particular: No clown has the proper colors to fill in your rainbow lines, Truth never hidden once looked upon in a mirror, no water can make your dirty face seem clearly new- Take off the custom leave it in a room, Strike a match and watch as the flames eat away at the pain- Wipe that frown away and wear your smile everyday!