Friday, April 21, 2006

Behind Every Playstation There Is A Poet Comments

Rating: 5.0

Neon lights that confront the darkness
with words of the saviours delayed yet
assured return, flicker from above.
Deep fried chicken clouds
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Chuck Audette 04 May 2006

I agree with Est - that chewing gum line is bubblicious! - chuck

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Esther Leclerc 21 April 2006

Wonderful poem, lots of meat here... Love the last four lines (oh so true) and 'chewing gum mosaics - - street art.' I've had that feeling on seeing gum like that, but never the sense to put it into words... This poem is full of life.

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Danny Reynolds 21 April 2006

Quite right Vincent. We just need to find a way to tempt them out. Maybe some alternative games with subliminal messages, like: Grand Verse Auto, Or Poem Raider IV? Let's have some more suggestions everyone? Danny

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