Sunday, May 21, 2017

Behind Darkness There Is Sunshine Comments

Rating: 5.0

When darkness invades a poet's mind,
He quietens himself, yet seeks light.
Though he may feel utterly resigned
Yet he sees things beautiful and bright.
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Khairul Ahsan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 September 2022

A truthful write. I can't agree more with what the poet has expressed in the first stanza. Top score!

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Ella Lazaare 30 June 2017

Beautifully self-aware and perfect reading for fellow poets! You have such a talent for language. Thank you for sharing.

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Khairul Ahsan 10 June 2020

Thank you, @Ella Lazaare. I am much inspired by your kind, appreciative words.

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B.m. Biswas 03 June 2017

A truism... a useful message..... Nicely presented.

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Khairul Ahsan 10 June 2020

Thank you, @B.m. Biswas, for your appreciation of the poem.

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Rebecca Navarre 27 May 2017

This Is Beyond Wonderful! ! ! ! ! You Have Summed This Poem Up Perfectly! ! ! ! ! Excellent Poetry! ! ! ! ! Thank You So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Joy, Peace And Blessings! ! ! ! ! So Very Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++ Saved! ! ! ! !

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Khairul Ahsan 09 June 2020

Thank you Rebecca, for your overwhelming praise and generous rating of my poem. Am so very much inspired, thanks again!

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Khairul Ahsan 10 June 2020

I am much inspired by the prolific praise you've showeed on my poem, @Rebecca Navarre, and the generous rating you have given it. Thank you so much for the kind appreciation!

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 May 2017

Yet he wears a smile! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Khairul Ahsan 09 June 2020

Thanks for your reading and commenting, EKL.

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Khairul Ahsan 10 June 2020

Thanks for quoting from the poem, EKL. My pleasure to share the poem with you all.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 23 May 2017

It is a lovely poem, trying to give positive message to the unhappy poets. Yes it is the right thing, however try to loose the will power, because that is the one which gives to the people. Let go, let God direct your steps, and then you have no sadness. Everything works for good anyway, through sadness, challenges and problems in life we get stronger, wiser and better. The wise learns from everything.

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Khairul Ahsan 09 June 2020

Thanks for appreciating the poem and sharing your enlightening, philosophical thoughts. You are of my mom's age, my deepest respects to you for your devotion to poetry, dear poet @Lasoaphia Quxazs.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 May 2017

His heart feels heavy, yet he wears smiles, Sitting at home, he wanders a million miles. Quietly he reins in his wandering thoughts, Scribbles them down to chart his poetry plots..... love these lines. This is a marvellous poem with nice collocation. Many thanks for sharing this gem....10

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Khairul Ahsan 09 June 2020

I am glad that you have loved those lines, @Kumarmani Mahakul. Much inspired by your appreciative comment and generous rating.

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