Tuesday, February 28, 2006

Behind A Dirty Peephole Comments

Rating: 4.5

I see dirty people
Behind a dirty peephole
Doing dirty things
For the money that it brings
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Lea Simpson
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Gina Onyemaechi 03 March 2006

I like the way you tell it, Lea. 9 from Gina.

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Jerry Hughes 01 March 2006

A pithy poem, love it...

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Moya Levy 01 March 2006

I like the way you have used symmetry in the last word each line - nice poem. Moyaxxx

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Lea Simpson

Lea Simpson

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