Saturday, March 13, 2010

Beginnings Comments

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Early glimmers of morning’s dew
In resplendent nestle fading
Yield to sun’s gentle emergence
Diffused in languorous release
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Don MacIver
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Adeline Foster 06 March 2012

I like it. Read mine - I Cannot Return - Adeline

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Amy Marie 13 March 2010

I like the part about the sun's gentle emergence ;)

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