Wednesday, July 30, 2008

Beginning To Forget Comments

Rating: 4.6


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Timothy Weiermann
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for everyone that leaves there are five more and its her fault she desided to miss out. I may barely know you but im sure ur something else.

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immortal Butterfly 20 March 2009

Wow This Is A Great Poem Your Thoughts Inspire As I Weep.

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Joseph Poewhit 10 March 2009

Under another tree there will be another girl, could even be the same one. Love is a trying game at 16 you have years to go. We all have heartbreaks in our lives.[TRY READING TO FORGET ]

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Trinidad Villafranca 06 January 2009

Your words they truly are something amazing you have a real talent

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Brittany graviet 06 October 2008

short but heart renching. your able to move people very easily.

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Amber ... 19 September 2008

lovely poem. simply beautiful.

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O Anna Niemus 14 September 2008

all the desires in your heart will be filled sooner or later.. only God knows how many days hence

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Greenwolfe 1962 12 August 2008

Yea. But the tears say you have a long long way to go. GW62

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Paul Tousignant 12 August 2008

Right to the point... And what a good point it is! A very well writen poem. And so we go, Paul

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Tanny Quin 11 August 2008

Few words, powerful thought! ! Phebe

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 08 August 2008

this is amazing beauty of true love.gotcha!

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Ency Bearis 08 August 2008

short and nice...well done..

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Javier Falcon 06 August 2008

Its pretty good... A lover is the only item which you should not forget... Good write...

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Anjali Sinha 06 August 2008

Yeah u deserve a +10

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Anjali Sinha 06 August 2008

Hey Tim, Short and sweet---but dont forget that lovers embrace. good write--thanks for sharing with me regards anju

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Carol Rhodes 05 August 2008

TIMOTHY, THANK YOU FOR SHARING WITH ME. THIS IS THE FIST I'VE READ. SHOWS PROMISE AND ABILITY, IN MY NOT SO HUMBLE OPINION. WHAT IS ALWAYS SO BEAUTIFUL TO ME IS TO READ A MAN'S WORDS OF HIS LOVE, LOST OR KEPT, AND HIS PASSION FOR A FEMALE-OR ALL CREATURES. MEANS A MAN IS IN TOUCH WITH HIMSELF/HIS FEELINGS AND THAT IS THE MAN WHO WILL SHINE. SHALL READ MORE. CAROL

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Lacey Unknown 05 August 2008

Can you ever truly forget a lover's embrace? Good write. Beautiful ~Lacey~

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James Timothy Jarrett 01 August 2008

Nice. Short and sweet. Well felt poem.

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Victoria Isles 31 July 2008

Hallo! I love you're poems!

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Timothy Weiermann

Timothy Weiermann

Tucson, Arizona
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