Thursday, August 13, 2009

Beginning To End Comments

Rating: 4.9

Nurtured by mother’s body,
Close to her heart she cradles us.
We are complete – but not whole,
Until she lets us go.
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Nancy Crossman
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You have dealt with a difficult subject with compelling class. It really does catch up with us so let us maximize every moment. Well done!

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Siddharth Singh 16 August 2009

Simply outstanding. Where have you been lady? This is where you belong. Voted 10.

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Afzal Shauq 15 August 2009

Death will wrap its soft black robe around us, Taking us away from everything we know, Fear, pain, misery – no more, In peace at last, we will rest, And the end will be the beginning. again a ver rich poem..and agree with your idea an believe that every thing ends to peace.. as life itself..and the idea you expressed here is best and meaningful enough..well done..good work..keep writing..

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Leah Ayliffe 14 August 2009

wonderful! it is good to think of death as a release to something greater. powerful write!

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Ivor Hogg 14 August 2009

birrth to deat to rebirth thecycle is endless

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Graham Russell 13 August 2009

from life to death.... you take us by the hand as you show us what lies ahead...... thank you

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Ted M 13 August 2009

You have presented a picture of a life's circle. Great write. Have you ever heard that song; 'All my life is a circle'

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