Sunday, April 15, 2007

Beginning Starts Here Comments

Rating: 4.4

Standing on the beach at sunset
As the sun begins to disappear
Setting the horizon a fiery glow
We hold each others hand
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David Harris
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Dorothy- A. Holmes 29 April 2007

David, Hello! You have done it again...another winner! Dorothy

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Bob Blackwell 29 April 2007

There are many treasures to be found in life and a walk beside the sea with the one you love is one of the best of them. Thank you david I enjoyed this poem. Bob

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David Taylor 26 April 2007

Looking for treasures, when the greatest treasure is already in their hands! Beautiful poem David.

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Melvina Germain 17 April 2007

A rather blissful feeling flows through this very soft and serene poem. I picture myself in the setting and it feels soooo good. Hmmm Thankyou David that was really nice, what a wonderful way to start my day, umm ---Fabulous poem----Melvina---

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Marci Made 15 April 2007

What a beautiful beginning to love watching a sunset on a beach together. What a marvelous love story you've woven here. Am smiling as I type this having just a short while ago watched a beautiful sunset on this heaven of an Island.....alone, yes, but still amazing and calming and so thankful to just have seen. You have a spectacular way of telling a story that one can relate to in at least a part of if not the whole.A gift for sure......mm.xo

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Lisa Wilkinson 15 April 2007

A great poem after a ten hour shift at work, peaceful and tranquil, thank you David. Reminds me of a poem of mine called Beaches, cheers

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 15 April 2007

Here to eternity comes to mind with this poem my friend... Very romantic David..10

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Francesca Johnson 15 April 2007

In fact, David, I've added it to my Favourite Poems list because it moves me so much........... Fran x

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Francesca Johnson 15 April 2007

Nothing else to say except that this poem is beautiful, beautiful, beautiful..... Love, Fran xxx

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Linda Ori 15 April 2007

And a wonderful way to begin! Lovely imagery, so peaceful and serene. One of the precious moments in life and love to savor through the years. Linda

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JoAnn McGrath 15 April 2007

That's so beautiful David..........: O)

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