Surely I must have loved you
ever since the beginning of time
the planets shifted, the stars collided
ever since your eyes had captured mine
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This is a remarkably strong poem, based on a rather simple (and somewhat corny) sentiment. Starts off a little cliched, but in the end packs a pretty strong wallop. Nice work.
What a beautifully, heartwarm poem....I like this very much, Lee...Romance & best friends a life of loving doth make...Excellent crafting employed, young lass! ~ ~ ~
Wow, I love the last line of the 1st verse, really puts a mood on the poem, And 'It had to have been the way you breathed life in my barren world and made it 'heaven' 'AWSOME' Well done Lee, love as always, The other 'Lee'
Lee this is beautiful poem of love. The kind of love a lot of people dream about, but unfortunately never find. I have been lucky to have found mine. Top marks and thanks for sharing this beautiful poem my friend. David