Beginning Of The World Comments

'Where are we going'? Many many people ask ourselves in the year 2020.

This intriguing poem is the last one you have posted- I wonder very much why this is so. Please drop us a note, dear Hazel

An excellent poem where we get true reflection of 'love and life'. 'We move together through our small world with a gentle rhythm, I ask you 'Where are we going'? You reply, 'To the birth of our passion' - To me, these are the best lines of the poem. The reader truly feels that a poet is talking to him. Loved the comments of Valsa George and Mihaela Pirjol.

One of the best poems i have read recently. Sometimes life seems meaningless without love, that is true and sublime. Very nicely crafted to make interesting reading.10+++

Sweet and it has some essential questions that make us smile and may cry at the same time, but let it open the new horizon, the beginning of new world...rebirth the damaged souls to be fine as finally hearts bound and found a way to complete. I am glad you make it whole finally :)

I ask you 'Where are we going'? / You reply, 'To the birth of our passion, / to the essence of a natural grace- - - magic, pure magic performed by a poetic soul and a loving heart yearning for all that is good in the world we should be living in.10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++ and into my fav list of poems

A thoughtful poem, so nicely written. I think you should write poems regularly. After a long time I read a poem by you.

o the birth of our passion, to the essence of a natural grace that dances with nature's raw illusions, we will feel no end, just the beginning lovely poetry HD

amazing poems by great poet, well done, every success dear friend

Two souls united as one move in a rhythm. There is the promise of a new beginning in every step. The journey to a new life in a world torn by divisive forces and hypocrisy brings in a ray of hope for a new order. A beautiful poem highlighting the power of love that binds two hearts together.

A Sensitive and quite interesting poem indeed. Two heartbeats...........one, .....plete. Just beautiful.

This poem of yours has a novel aroma and flow: both from emotional standpoint, as well from poetic structure: it has wisdom, a spiritual side to it, like a rebirth from its own suffering: it has Consciousness: it has serenity! The apogee of the human soul!

Another well crafted poem Hazel. Cheers!

Very beautiful and healing words. Like a prayer we all so much need. Thank you Hazel. You are a beautiful soul.