Tuesday, June 11, 2013

Beginning Of The Sunrise Comments

Rating: 5.0

when i was a little child below my own legs
when i was my mom's cute little god's gift
and my father who was not before my eyes
at that time i was left alone to survive with a pen
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Vishal Sharma
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Vishal Sharma 11 October 2015

great stuff

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Neela Nath Das 11 June 2013

Humble you are, really.Loved.

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Abhishek Mishra 11 June 2013

Great one............

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Farah Ilyas 11 June 2013

Be humble to others as well as towards own self is good quality to have..nice poem, use of pen to embellish your emotions, best usage...keep writing

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