Beginning Of The End (Part 2) Comments

Part 2 doesnt disappoint either. I love how you show your strength in your writing. Very well done. Thank you for sharing :)

hey! ! ! chris..i wonder whether these things are based on recent experience....in any case i enjoyed it very much! ! ! bit like watching a movie...great narration 10+++ with lots of love shan

All abused women could draw strength from your poem. Ron

really good this second part of your poem too... wonderful and liked these both of your inter related story poems.. well done...10++++++++

C. I could swear you are me. I would like more of this - tis like looking into the mirror, and moving from fading to smiling. t x

You do deserve a medal Christine, Also an applause for writing it down. But more importantly you deserve a peace (inner peace) Tracy

Christine, you deserve a gold medal for all that you have gone through. It seems your ex needed an anger management course! He had a huge problem and blamed you. Part 2 explains more and it was a great move to put 2 parts. This poem, as the other, is excellent work! 10 Karin Anderson

just always remember that all has its end....as the night comes a day...the deeper is fall.....listen and be contented....your the master of Yourself and the captain of your soul....a perfect reminder to us. thank you and God bless....

Hopefully this will be the the real end of a miserable 2 years existence Christine... I fully agree with Louis it is a superbly crafted poem...10++++undoubtedly

TWO YEARS OF STRUGGLING TO GET HIM OUT THE DOOR. YOU HAVE FINALLY SETTLED THE SCORE. HOPEFULLY HE WON'T BOTHER YOU ANY MORE. THIS POEM IS BEAUTIFULLY EXPRESSED. A TEN