Beginning Of The End (Part 1) Comments

Wow! A beautiful piece, I would say! 10+++

Wow, you sure are impresive. Very well done and said. I cant wait to read part 2, thank you for sharing :)

hi chris! ! ! ! ! ! oh! ! ! you have no idea how glad i m to see..you havnt left PH! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I guess i m not the only one who miss you! ! ! ............. hey this an entertaining write as always Chris....so glad to have you here! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! i thot u r gone 4ever and send a mail, just came to your page at least an old one and found this enterating new one 10++ for this one.... with lots of love and hugs(that's how Barbara Says) i ll add a welcome kiss too! ! ! ! shas

Hooray for you, Christine. I'm anxious to read part two. Ron

How could I give you what you desire, When you forced me to play with fire................ fire has its own reeks by the fight game when played by the anger................quite eloquent write ingenious,10+++, thanks for sharing

To make an impression, You would be little me with disgrace, Laugh at my misfortunes Purposely get in my face. well written... heart feeling one and rich is idea... expression is impressive and the way you wrote is perfect...well done 10++++++++

Ye gods. You read my mind and heart and put it into words better than I ever could. On to part 2. ******* brilliant. t x

Great work Christine. Nobody is going to pull the wool over your eyes. I will read the next part soon. Your words are clever and smart and a lot of information has gone into this piece. Goodonya! 10 Karin Anderson

touche! don't ever let anyone put you down, even a mouse can make a sound. you picked yourself up when he tried to knock you down because of the inner strength that you found. I LOVE IT. A TEN