Eternal sunshine brightly
rises over the east
Rays of daylight slowly
embrace cold decaying mist
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Its little things like this that make life worth while but at the same time are to easily neglected or forgotten. Thank you for reminding me how lovely life can be. Your words really do capture the moment perfectly
Beautiful images you create with this poem. Melodious and refreshing. A lovely write.
Hemakumar, This is stunning....such a perfect scene for your reader to sit in to read these wonderful words..........lovely penned piece of writing '10' Cleanest dishes Jon
A lovely poem to brighten the spirits. Thank you Hemakumar for the spring vision.
The patience of nature knows only the spring, Enjoyed the read, Thank you.
You so aptly describe the coming of Spring. Your words put a joyous breath into living things. Great poem...I enjoyed it very much.
Here in Yorkshire, England, the fields are leaping with lambs. I have a feeling you would enjoy seeing them... You have a strong feeling for life, Hemakumar. Thank you.
Spring is my favouritge season, the start of life, a burst of joy. Lovely poem. Seasons change but this was written by that which never changes. Bob
So vivid and peaceful, I could feel myself there, A true pleasure to read, Also a 10
A very heartwarming and mesmerizing write Hemakumar! beautiful read indeed! ! *10*! ! Best regards! Friend Thad
'melodious morning tunes' - great phrase with wonderful flow. A beautifully descriptive poem with great detail to spring's wondrous glories. A lovely spring scene painted upon the page. Great job! Linda :)
very beautiful words to describe such a wonderful and beautiful season your descriptive words were warming and talently chosen and written with heart and soul, , blessings..cecil
Of course this entire poem is beautiful, but i really found myself drawn in by the first few lines 'Eternal sunshine brightly rises over the east Rays of daylight slowly embrace cold decaying mist' i wish i had thought of that!
This is precious Hemaumar, an exquisite description of the beginning of spring. Melvina
This is a lovely write Hemakumar, a delight to read, with wonderful imagery. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
It's really the spring of life and I see a poet-painter in this valuable poem Hema! Good luck to you my dear and many thanks indeed for your lovely comment on my poem.
A beautiful description of re-awakening life. Stunningly descriptive a worthy 10 in my humble opinion. Regards Craig.
Beautiful metaphors flowing with precision and feeling connecting nature with the human persona