Sunday, April 13, 2008

Beginning Of Spring Comments

Rating: 5.0

Eternal sunshine brightly
rises over the east
Rays of daylight slowly
embrace cold decaying mist
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Hemakumar Nanayakkara
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Barry A. Lanier 13 August 2008

Beautiful metaphors flowing with precision and feeling connecting nature with the human persona

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Tanya Stanford 11 August 2008

Its little things like this that make life worth while but at the same time are to easily neglected or forgotten. Thank you for reminding me how lovely life can be. Your words really do capture the moment perfectly

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Dawn Slanker 04 August 2008

Beautiful images you create with this poem. Melodious and refreshing. A lovely write.

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~ Jon London ~ 01 June 2008

Hemakumar, This is stunning....such a perfect scene for your reader to sit in to read these wonderful words..........lovely penned piece of writing '10' Cleanest dishes Jon

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Simone Inez Harriman 31 May 2008

A lovely poem to brighten the spirits. Thank you Hemakumar for the spring vision.

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Usha Pisharody 18 May 2008

Picturesque and lovely, and inspiring!

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Charles M Moore 28 April 2008

The patience of nature knows only the spring, Enjoyed the read, Thank you.

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Theresa Moore 27 April 2008

You so aptly describe the coming of Spring. Your words put a joyous breath into living things. Great poem...I enjoyed it very much.

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John Raubenheimer 27 April 2008

Here in Yorkshire, England, the fields are leaping with lambs. I have a feeling you would enjoy seeing them... You have a strong feeling for life, Hemakumar. Thank you.

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Bob Blackwell 27 April 2008

Spring is my favouritge season, the start of life, a burst of joy. Lovely poem. Seasons change but this was written by that which never changes. Bob

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Rema Prasanna 26 April 2008

change in season, spring always pleasing. A good write.....

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Howard Johnson 25 April 2008

So vivid and peaceful, I could feel myself there, A true pleasure to read, Also a 10

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Thad Wilk 23 April 2008

A very heartwarming and mesmerizing write Hemakumar! beautiful read indeed! ! *10*! ! Best regards! Friend Thad

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Linda Ori 22 April 2008

'melodious morning tunes' - great phrase with wonderful flow. A beautifully descriptive poem with great detail to spring's wondrous glories. A lovely spring scene painted upon the page. Great job! Linda :)

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Cecil Hickman 21 April 2008

very beautiful words to describe such a wonderful and beautiful season your descriptive words were warming and talently chosen and written with heart and soul, , blessings..cecil

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David Desantis 21 April 2008

Of course this entire poem is beautiful, but i really found myself drawn in by the first few lines 'Eternal sunshine brightly rises over the east Rays of daylight slowly embrace cold decaying mist' i wish i had thought of that!

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Melvina Germain 21 April 2008

This is precious Hemaumar, an exquisite description of the beginning of spring. Melvina

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Ernestine Northover 19 April 2008

This is a lovely write Hemakumar, a delight to read, with wonderful imagery. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Nimal Dunuhinga 19 April 2008

It's really the spring of life and I see a poet-painter in this valuable poem Hema! Good luck to you my dear and many thanks indeed for your lovely comment on my poem.

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Craig Anderson 19 April 2008

A beautiful description of re-awakening life. Stunningly descriptive a worthy 10 in my humble opinion. Regards Craig.

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Hemakumar Nanayakkara

Hemakumar Nanayakkara

Colombo / Sri Lanka
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