Beginning Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

Beginning

Rating: 4.5


I wait for the flowers to open up
And spill its scent into the air to float
I wait to catch some and return
To start my day with a positive note

Saturday, May 30, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: morning
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
George Krokos 30 May 2020

A nice quatrain poem. BTW in the second line the pronoun - its - should be replaced with - their - as you're talking about flowers which is plural. Thanks for sharing. Regards George K.

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A lovely poem. Beautiful flowers with their lovely scent make our spirits soar. They reinvigorate one's feelings. A well crafted write.

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