Tuesday, April 11, 2006

Begining. Comments

Rating: 4.8

Ice crystals
falling, rising, twisting on the air
a spiraling mass, on the wind
falling covering the earth.
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Roy Storey
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Myra Jefferson 26 June 2006

I keep coming back to this. Love it, Roy! A 10, for sure!

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***** ********* 11 April 2006

A good title Roy, it is a very pleasing poem too, just a few spellings, do you have a spell checker? I am crap at spelling too, and use mine all the time. Here they are anyway. Crystals, typo on 'unfolds' and running in the second stanza. Lovely poem and I hope you don't take offence at my observations. 9 from looking forward to warmer times and new beginnings, Tai

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Roy Storey

Roy Storey

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