Begining Of An End Comments

powerful emotions...powerful lines...i liked the way you wring out the pain soaked feels inside your mind...highly expressive...10

short yes poignant. Thank you for this one.

Wow! lovely... Asif it shows that you tasted th bitter truth of life... Nice yara

Your images are drastically vivid and melancholy. I hope they have done the job for you getting negativity out of your system as it is a extremely powerful piece of writing. Well done. Karin Anderson

It's a beautiful piece. I like it greatly, mainly because of your expressive nature. Awesome write keep it up. :)

hey asif, now u better stop writing all this crying stuff you are made to write better things like that nice one u sent in my inbox for this Ill give u ++++10 no doubt for the quality of your poem but I dont like the theme-- thinking all the while how sad you are

Good poem Asif. Do what you have vowed in this poem but the last line I shall read....'and start living'.