$begin Anew... Comments

Your title seems to suggest that you are not adverse to new beginnings and second chances. In spite of your hesitaiton to continue this relationship, I sense that you still have a place in your heart for this person. Excellent write. Love, SandraX

Well written couplet of when things do not work out. It is difficult to let go, but sometimes we must. To live in the moment is always the best Bob

I had missed out this good monologue! I wonder what had inspired this nice poem. Happy Diwali to you & Arunji. -Raj Nandy

strangely, , when i wrote my poem; another beginning' i came across this marvel of yours, , , , we are not in touch for some time, , , may be i ahve stopped learning, , i shall read your other works too, , this one, as usual is great, , a 10

good poem...bit sentimental...well framed lines 10

This is very good. especially the last stanza, ending was a beautiful twist....10

well expressed emotion..nice write/rhymes..A10 Ency Bearis