Thursday, September 20, 2018

Begged Comments

Rating: 5.0

She was left on a doorstep
Abandoned at birth
Her mother ran away
She was left to the church
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Tom Allport
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Irfanulla Shariff 02 October 2018

A wonderful story poem about hope and miracles. Very well penned! 10.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 September 2018

But miracles do happen After years apart Her mother found her Begged for a new start.....so touching with full of hope. A beautiful poem with positiveness nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.10

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Lodigiana Poetess 20 September 2018

A story of hope and new beginnings! something for us all to aspire to! Thank you for sharing this positive piece of work Tom...10+++ Lodigiana x

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