Wednesday, March 28, 2018

Beggar's Cry (Senryu) -Του Ζητιάνου Η Κραυγή Comments

Rating: 0.0

Please open my God,

the gates of Heaven for me!
...
Read full text

Kostas Lagos
COMMENTS
Rose Marie Juan-austin 31 March 2018

A very desperate cry for mercy that depicts a deep affirmation of faith in God. Yes, he could seek redemption in heaven. A great powerful poem that bites at poverty.10

0 0 Reply
Kostas Lagos 01 April 2018

Beggars and homless people are often stripped of any kind of pride, so they communicate better with God.Thank yoU R.M.!

0 0
Sandra Feldman 30 March 2018

The prayer and faith Of the most unlucky, penniless ones. Very moving

0 0 Reply
Kostas Lagos 31 March 2018

Thank you very much, Sandra.

0 0
Kumarmani Mahakul 29 March 2018

It is best prayer for real beggar but not for fake beggar. Nice haiku shared.

0 0 Reply
Kostas Lagos 29 March 2018

True.The one that inspired me for this pom was-unfortunately-a real one! Thank you for this comment.

0 0
Close
Error Success