Beggar....... Comments

.........filled with emotions..........portrays frustration, temptation well...............

Frustration amongst the youth fully reflects in your poem. poetry is an endless path from where there is no return. I regard your emotion n your write.

very nice....................full of emotions and expressions........... well done... invite u to read mine.

thank u very much., ......!

very nice. oozing with emotions.

nice sense of feelings.. i appreciate..

grt poem.........nice idea.....well written....

I enjoy the whole poem especially the last lines.Well done! ! !

We all beg for the things you begged for.Nice expression.