Tuesday, July 3, 2012

Beg For Simplicity Comments

Rating: 5.0

My dear soul,
of Love!
Fly
over the mountains
...
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Elena Sandu
COMMENTS
Kelly Seale 08 August 2012

Elena, your words with colors are delightful! Good Ink! -Kelly.

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Hamid Negah 05 August 2012

Elena, sentimental poem, very nice, i love it.

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Vipins Puthooran 29 July 2012

'tis a very beautiful poem! ! ! !

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 10 July 2012

its a freedom to the soul bestowing wisdom........wonderful poem

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Unwritten Soul 10 July 2012

Elena this is minunat poem, simplicity of elegance that was what you have done to this write.... half heart is black? ? ? do u know black is a mixture of all colors? so just convince yourself as all colors just painted in your heart, but yet you need to decide which is to be a dominant among others and that's a personality you will show...otherwise be a rainbow ;) _Unwritten Soul

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Hans Vr 09 July 2012

Wonderful aspirations, beautifully expressed. Very good poetry, Elena

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winds with hair undone will seek reflections divine in hearts that are rinsed with love

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Wabi Sabi 06 July 2012

you will get the cycle and actually you already are.... don't worry, you are,

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Captain Cur 04 July 2012

Elegant and simply delicious poem, colorful and beautifully written.

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