Tuesday, December 9, 2008

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A pyramid of goblets
Trickling wine down
Filling each
Who shall take what
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Kesav Easwaran 27 December 2008

good 'wine of love'...good spirits..make you talk sweet all the night...beautiful ending lines, Sadiq...the poem talks of facts more than her long hairs...10

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Anjali Sinha 12 December 2008

Is this a goodbye if then its sad whatever nicely expressed ++++++10 as always regards anjali

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C T Heart 09 December 2008

symbolic piece before a goodbye...beautifully written.10

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James Mclain 09 December 2008

Thank you so very much...

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