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OK, there are some good lines in here but I feel you are trying to make the repetition to work so much some of your lines don't make sense. 'I always happy' is clumsy and awkward, and 'how do you do' probably could be re-worded. I am always happy sounds a lot better, but that doesn't go along with your repetition. Its what you want to accomplish with the poem.

for me, this is the best poem you've ever made.. brilliant idea, amazing words.. how romantic.. excellent work, you are absolutely TALENTED.. I wish a bright future career for you.. you are gifted, I know you can make it to the pro level