Thursday, June 3, 2010

Before You Learn To Cook A Soup… Comments

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Watch out my friend, watch out always
Be cautious about what you talk
Carries farther the voice you make
Talking at times is no cakewalk!
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Mamta Agarwal 13 June 2010

Kesav, reading your poem, spo many proverbs are runninmg in my head. mindfulness, concentration is essential for healthy living, simple steps prepare one to masater any art, be it speech or cooking. thanks 10 Mamta

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 June 2010

‘You learn to boil water first/’Before you learn to cook a soup! ’…nice finish Priming, programming and rationizing are required before jumping… Poetry requires exalted but with aesthetics…it’s priming… Thanks for such a PP [Practical Poetry] 10//10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Eyan Desir 08 June 2010

Well good poetic write

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Indira Renganathan 05 June 2010

Very lofty...'think(or learn) before you do'...I agree...yes...boiled water is good...I bow to your intelligence....thanks a lot Kesav

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shooting out without knowing the basics...as a person without much knowledge in poetry...i too cannot comment..the message apllies to anything for that matter and has been nailed down very well

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Kesav Easwaran 04 June 2010

'Soup' is only an allegoric poetic symbol used to elucidate the poem concept...true, nowadays one need not boil water to prepare soup (this, you know better than me!) but the implication there is one must learn to boil water first before learning serious cooking...thanks a lot Elena, for your nice comment

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Elena Sandu 04 June 2010

Lovely poem, yes you are right we should control what comes out of own mouth or better keep it shut if any bad can do..but lol, also I must understand that there is not necessary need of boiling water for a soup becouse nowadays we can get use of microwaves in this speed world we have its hard to get some pacience..

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