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nice ending, this poem, didnt follow alot but it tells a good tale good writting

Bonnie this is a beautiful piece. thank you for it. It reminded me of my dream. At the end of last year, I had a recurring dream, in it, every night i would go home and help my parents on the farm, after sometime, life became the dream and i literally used to wonder where I was.. Thank you.

This poem brings about a beautiful description of your memories.. Enjoy it much..

Bonnie Such an understanding you have of your Mother and how she did the best that she could. As children we have no understanding of how the job of Motherhood is not an easy one. And, I love the sense of smell you used to bring another depth to this poem. Lovely! Karin Anderson

Oh what a beautiful memory. It is nice to be remided of the little things. I am sure that you will treasure this memory always.

Beautiful and touchy poem. 10+

very touching understanding a love and their hardships......WOW 10 ASIA

Bonnie - A very descriptive, soft, & loving write - holds the reader from beginning to end... nice, very nice! Robert

The last stanza of this poem is much touchy.10 for this beautiful composition.

When i read this i think about my own mother and even my own grandmother. This is something that made me cry, and i hardly ever cry. Love those that love you. Ashley

A poignant tribute, beautifully expressed! Excellent.

This is really a beautiful poem.

What a beautiful poem about your mother. I loved how well you expressed your feelings. I too remember the days of my mom dressing up and the smells of her perfume. Wonderful images and deep feelings of love for your mom, here. A ten!

wow I believe it,10 for you

A bitter-sweet remembrance of a mother that did her best and a daughter that understood. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥