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An incredable write Fay! where were you when i was seventeen! a beautiful poem Fay! regards Bob

You play the passion of one 'in love' with fistfuls of arpeggios in this highly romantic write. Actually it reminds me of that beautiful old standard from 'The Music Man': 'There was love all around But I never heard it singing No, I never heard it at all Till there was you' Your final line is particularly pleasing. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

short and sweet. very sweet. your writing flows realy good.

mine eyes are green with envy....how I wish I could see as you now do :) .....this is just simply lovely to read Fay

Very lovely poems... And you the fine Fairy be deserved ten fine smiles.. Tsira

I think you described love so well here fay... Andy 10

Beautiful poem Fay eloquence at its best enjoyed it so Chris 10++++

Very insightful write Fay, being in love makes us look at things in a different way, 10 Lynda xx

This poem reflects an inspired, cultured style; there are romantic themes, however now I should suggest quiet, moderation: this poem deserves ten any way.

great poem with great imagery, a delight to read :)