Before We Met Comments

it was way too long for what you were saying and it was a bit bleak to read...maybe try shortening it and use more flavor words...don't get me wrong it's a good message that u have some who has your back. It just wasn't all that appealing to me.

i love it..so expressive...passionate...truly displays loving relations...i can relate...

love it, very understanding and perceptive truly how people can change you

Before we met I wasn't sure what to do who to turn to I was afraid wanting to give up Feeling like no one understood me and never would Feeling hurt and scared Very strong intent and feeling of womanhood here during anyone's adolescence. voted 10 for you..

Another amazing one kiddo, great emotion, feeling & description so raw & real!

I can actually relate to this a lot. I regret things from my past and i would still be that girl if it wasnt for him. I know what its like to want to be there with them and to always be there for them no matter what state of mind they're in. And there are other things similar as well, but i think ive gotten the point across. The way you were able 2 put this into words is impressive and it turned out to be a very good piece. Well done and best wishes ~*~SG

Great write, this person must be very special. I like the writing and i can relate to some of it.

I love this nice piece

top 2 bottom a really good piece. even though it kinda long its not to much to read cause i got caught up in the world of your words.... great write

I love the poem.It expresses alot about you. kool poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! um...just a luv it. hope it turn out ok

kool poem i like it. wish u guys the best.

a nice story in life, full of emotion. nice language too voted10 surya

i agree with howard, a nice story of emotions, but it was too long and too many i's and you's, but t was good, keep writing.

A nice story of where emotions are.Not to be harsh or mean it was a bit too long and too many I's and You's. Please keep on writing and never give up for me or anyone. What you have written is very good prose that is all chopped up.

a long story and ends in love poem..grace

you spelled the word about wrongly.... good write i felt you should made this a little shorter but you get top marks.... for your little love poem hehaha

if this is truly you....you are a beautiful person. who writes beautiful poems...10

i love it. it really says alot about u.

love well felt is love well expressed; there's too much love to give and just waiting for the right time.10 +