Saturday, September 27, 2008

Before They Fall Comments

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Watching leaves shiver
from every hollow gust

I turned my back:
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Mimi Mata
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R.benjamin Abate 30 April 2013

To perch on a branch/ where there is an abundance/ of unbitten fruit. Very nice.

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Indranil Bhaduri 14 November 2012

Touching, feelings depicted in mindblowing verses...

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Ridge Cahill 12 November 2008

Your poetry has such feeling, 'Before They Fall' is no exception. Simply outstanding.

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Mimi Mata

San Diego, California
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