Monday, August 30, 2021

Before They Disappear Comments

Rating: 5.0

I remember Grandpa…when our family gathered at his house…as our joy and laughter filled the air…we would always find him smiling…sitting in his favorite chair.

I remember how he'd smile…listening to new stories…or stories we retold…when I was young I figured that's what Grandpas do when Grandpas get that old.
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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 September 2021

Rereading this amazing document is a very pleasurable deed. Most beautiful Tribute for grandfathers

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 August 2021

Loveliest Tribute to a grandfather and a brilliant selfportrait in verse, with beautiful end rhymes and rhythm.5 Stars full

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 August 2021

I cite here few lines dear Jim: Hoping every memory I'm a part of…over time…in my family will appear and reappear…and just like memories of my grandpa will bring a smile to their faces… when I'm no longer here.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 August 2021

This is a greatest poem document about a grandfather's momentum in our life as his grandchildren. Very heart touchingly thought, and created. True enjoyable poem, dear Jim. I always like to read your poems

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