Thursday, August 15, 2013

Before The Twilight Falls Comments

Rating: 4.9

If sleep should steal your soul, my love,
Before the twilight falls,
Then I shall be there by your side
When’er the darkness calls.
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Valerie Dohren
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Roseann Shawiak 10 October 2013

Very beautiful love poem. It's how I feel about my husband, even after 37 years of marriage. Thank you for sharing Val. RoseAnn

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Heather Wilkins 22 September 2013

excellent Val. Beautiful writing. very emotional

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Danny Draper 16 September 2013

A beautiful love poem with the care and dedication of a true marriage of heart and mind.

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Mohabeer Beeharry 04 September 2013

Very touching indeed. So human. I love the writing.great. Mohabeer Beeharry

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Om Chawla 29 August 2013

An excellent love poem genuine expression of faith trust and commitment. When I read second and third stanza of your poem I was reminded of your earlier poem 'What say you my heart' where you wrote 'Sleep like a babe so tranquil in the arms of loving care ' It is sheer delight reading your poems.

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Jodie Hardy 27 August 2013

Very touching Valerie, beautifully written. So sad. X x

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Patricia Grantham 27 August 2013

In sickness and in health till death we do part. A beautiful poem of love, care and devotion. So delicately written and expressed with great emotions. Nicely written

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John Brown 25 August 2013

I was welling up there Val. Another gem.

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Juan Olivarez 22 August 2013

Valerie I always rave about your poetry. No one could ever fault me. Great piece.

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 August 2013

Wow. Wonderful write.. Beautiful love poem..Loved it.

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Meena Mustafa 20 August 2013

This is such a lovely poem... shows the depth of love and care. My hats off to you Val :) Thanks for sharing

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Unwritten Soul 18 August 2013

Again you melt the ice before the heat touching it first....amazing write_SOul

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Sally Plumb Plumb 18 August 2013

Fabulous piece of work, Val.

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Valsa George 17 August 2013

A very moving write, intense with passion and emotion! True love bides through thick and thin! ! Greatly enjoyed! !

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Valsa George 17 August 2013

A very moving write, intense with passion and emotion! True love bides through thick and thin! ! Greatly enjoyed! !

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G.R. Gaus 17 August 2013

To be with that one special person at the end and then some, to show that person true love in the final hour and beyond, to walk him through that passage way into the afterlife, never letting go; Simply Beautiful Valerie.....

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Heather Wilkins 17 August 2013

a beautiful romantic poem our life shall always be as one not ever set apart through all my time I'll ever hold your mem'ry in my heart. so lovely

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Dinesan Madathil 17 August 2013

Authentic in tone and enticing in charm, this poem speaks out a poet`s heart wedded to love and its mysterious phases in our life. A good write Valerie.

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Hazel Durham 17 August 2013

A moving write with your deep love shining so bright! Beautiful write!

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Vivek Tiwari 16 August 2013

Love, devotion, trust, faith and pure romantism; jingling words, rhyming sounds and bewitching theme. It reminds me lines from one of my poem 'My soul is thine Thou soul is mine Come on along Let our souls combine Upto our living and even after dying.'

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