If sleep should steal your soul, my love,
Before the twilight falls,
Then I shall be there by your side
When’er the darkness calls.
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A beautiful love poem with the care and dedication of a true marriage of heart and mind.
Very touching indeed. So human. I love the writing.great. Mohabeer Beeharry
An excellent love poem genuine expression of faith trust and commitment. When I read second and third stanza of your poem I was reminded of your earlier poem 'What say you my heart' where you wrote 'Sleep like a babe so tranquil in the arms of loving care ' It is sheer delight reading your poems.
In sickness and in health till death we do part. A beautiful poem of love, care and devotion. So delicately written and expressed with great emotions. Nicely written
Valerie I always rave about your poetry. No one could ever fault me. Great piece.
This is such a lovely poem... shows the depth of love and care. My hats off to you Val :) Thanks for sharing
Again you melt the ice before the heat touching it first....amazing write_SOul
A very moving write, intense with passion and emotion! True love bides through thick and thin! ! Greatly enjoyed! !
A very moving write, intense with passion and emotion! True love bides through thick and thin! ! Greatly enjoyed! !
To be with that one special person at the end and then some, to show that person true love in the final hour and beyond, to walk him through that passage way into the afterlife, never letting go; Simply Beautiful Valerie.....
a beautiful romantic poem our life shall always be as one not ever set apart through all my time I'll ever hold your mem'ry in my heart. so lovely
Authentic in tone and enticing in charm, this poem speaks out a poet`s heart wedded to love and its mysterious phases in our life. A good write Valerie.
A moving write with your deep love shining so bright! Beautiful write!
Love, devotion, trust, faith and pure romantism; jingling words, rhyming sounds and bewitching theme. It reminds me lines from one of my poem 'My soul is thine Thou soul is mine Come on along Let our souls combine Upto our living and even after dying.'
Very beautiful love poem. It's how I feel about my husband, even after 37 years of marriage. Thank you for sharing Val. RoseAnn