Before The Storm Comments

Yes, Yes you have what it takes to be a great poet and you are one take it from me many will hate your work because it is so good and you love God. Tom Zart The Westport Poet

Wonderful! This is a great poem. 'Before the Storm' is a fantastic read. L

Splendid Tan! I can hear the sound of storm the way you described........the secret whisper of life.......I love this poem......your poems show maturity.

Good metaphor. Very constant and intense build up. I was waitng for the storm to break, but I'm glad you left it where it ended. A great poem.

I enjoyed the build up, gives off clear images, well done: -))

Wow... That was nice. I agree, the stanza about the army was great.: -)

nice description; I especially liked the stanzas about the 'army'.

I think the -ing forms are just perfect for getting it across. I really liked it.

good imagery, well done.