Tuesday, May 8, 2012

Before The Rain Comments

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Blue is taken by the expectant rain
And given clothes of silver
I await the cleansing
Knowing soon I will not miss her
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Simon Collins
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Kasia Fedyk 15 May 2012

Simon, very beautiful and touching, its pure soul expression.

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Valerie Dohren 13 May 2012

Very imaginative - you may like to read mine entitled After The Rain.

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Unwritten Soul 12 May 2012

It is not like what i imagine when i first read the title, but it still beautiful it has a nice depth of meaning, beautiful shot screen (and i see you eat noodles...must be hungry waiting for the rain huh hahaha joking!) Keep writing_Unwritten Soul

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Saadat Tahir 08 May 2012

beautiful imaginative lines...allegorical and well crafted. liked yer lines mate be happy :)

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