Blue is taken by the expectant rain
And given clothes of silver
I await the cleansing
Knowing soon I will not miss her
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Very imaginative - you may like to read mine entitled After The Rain.
It is not like what i imagine when i first read the title, but it still beautiful it has a nice depth of meaning, beautiful shot screen (and i see you eat noodles...must be hungry waiting for the rain huh hahaha joking!) Keep writing_Unwritten Soul
beautiful imaginative lines...allegorical and well crafted. liked yer lines mate be happy :)
Simon, very beautiful and touching, its pure soul expression.