Tuesday, October 20, 2009

Before The Rain Comments

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Before the Rain

as if the sky is overpowering the sea
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Rajkumar Mukherjee
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Obinna Eruchie 27 October 2009

After suspending in the sky as clouds, rain water falls and is a blessing to earth as portrayed in these wonderful lines, 'the sea water evaporates / moistens the clouds / as if a catalyst / rain drops / bring solace to Earth'

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 23 October 2009

The rain of poetic muse..........a good write........

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Catrina Heart 22 October 2009

well described piece............loved it!

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Indira Babbellapati 22 October 2009

any verse describing rain, i enjoy!

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Maitreyee Joshi 20 October 2009

a beautiful imagery of the sky and the clouds before it rains.a nice write with a unique presentation.thanks, sir.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 20 October 2009

lovely imagery in this poem..you bring forth the formation of clouds and create a emotional out pour of rain....beautifully done...10

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Rajkumar Mukherjee

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KOLKATA, INDIA
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