Looking out the window,
On an overcast day,
The brave senses the impending storm,
With dark clouds hovering,
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does speak of you as brave...although I find the verse slightly contradictory from start to finish...but the arrival of rain is soothing at the end...keep writing
It sounds as if you have a brave heart and that you anticipate the rain. A writer can say so much about themselves in such little time. GW62
A lovely, evocative poem. Keep up the good work, Mehreen!