Tuesday, April 15, 2008

Before The Rain... Comments

Rating: 3.5

Looking out the window,
On an overcast day,
The brave senses the impending storm,
With dark clouds hovering,
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Mehreen Tahir
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Laurence Overmire 16 May 2008

A lovely, evocative poem. Keep up the good work, Mehreen!

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Waqas Naeem 30 April 2008

does speak of you as brave...although I find the verse slightly contradictory from start to finish...but the arrival of rain is soothing at the end...keep writing

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Greenwolfe 1962 29 April 2008

It sounds as if you have a brave heart and that you anticipate the rain. A writer can say so much about themselves in such little time. GW62

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