Wednesday, February 10, 2010

Before The Moon Comes Up Comments

Rating: 4.0

Before the moon comes up
On to the endless sea
And the day pounding will stop
To become in dreams free
...
Read full text

Peter S. Quinn
COMMENTS
Rose-marie Mitchell 10 February 2010

I really like the title of this poem. I randomly choose poems to read, but a catchy title helps. The repetion is very effective and the imagery is great- '......in mystical ways of dark...'.........'and night is once more awake' Great Job!

0 0 Reply
Jean Dament 10 February 2010

Another lovely poem that I quite enjoyed reading about how things appear before the moon comes up. It has a great natural flow to it. Spiritsong

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success