Before The Light Fades Comments

Wo0o0o0o0o0w that's awesome.. A n! ce mean of love.. My regards :)

Beautiful expression of love. Well worded, well framed stanzas are balancing the feeling of love in an unique way. Lovely poem :) Thanks for sharing. I give full 10+ marks for its presentation.

This is a very poetic expression of a deep feeling of love. I especially like the first stanza, it puts the reader straight away in the right mindset for the rest of the poem. Well done!

i love this poem thank you i hope you read some of mine to thanks for the invit

This is a great poem, I felt it in my heart and in my soul. Hope you will meet your love again, beautiful work.

beautifully expressed with charm and strenght thank you for sharing this piece of poetry light the soul

'As my feelings dance on fickle lines'; hard to believe you are only 22. I give this poem a 10.

''When I look out, through the windows of time's prison'- what a tremendous line-rich imagery- ony 22- you should keep writing-a 10+ Joe

Wow! Abhay, this was written with a lot of different emotions involved. It seems. Kinda sad, empty, lost love, yet so very lovable.I've also lost a love once that I sometimes wonder will I ever see again. Very powerful 'piece' here. I gave it a 10, deservingly! Also, thanks for sharing such a lovely poem.

Romantic, sad, delicate.Once love comes it stays as a 'mark' 'imprinted' to heart. From that moment something change for all, memories are lived and relived in dreams again and again to keep love alive. 'Each day fades', love grows. Reborning and writing, this love will be keep alive in this life and in the next ones, forever and ever. Always 'before light fades' this magic love will live again, eternally.You proved a real poetical sensitivity..Cristina Teodor

A beautiful poem of the beauty of feeling, tfs

Wow, that was a great poem. I really enjoyed it, keep it up.